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Thin sheet of glass
By Justin Borer

I glide along with considerably ease
through past moments this seems like a breeze
instead of falling I feel the wind basking my face
as I guide others along the this thick sheet of glass

then someone catches my eyes
so elegant and graceful I swore she could fly
I looked at her with a passign glace
then she looked at me I was caught in a trance
As I stand behind this thin sheet of glass

I quickly looked away with embarassment
I just go gliding along wondering what to say
if she were to ever come this way
she did not aproach me so I wondered
should I break down
this thin sheet of glass

I then took a leap and I began to talk
to skate backwards what an interesting thought
then we talked and I thought all was well
but then I seemed to have fell
through another thin sheet of glass

I had to retreat back behind my sheet of glass
for in hopes that time would pass
Will I ever truly leave my place behind this thin sheet of glass....
©2006-2009 ~Crusher0508
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Author's Comments

As an experiance from tonight I learned many things. One of which I myself must find a balance between being gentlmenly and being charming and witty the latter of which I am far from. When it comes to talking or approaching a female I tense up and get nervous for I am afraid of myself or the outcome of what has happened or could happen. Which there after leads to inevitable turn down. Well I there for put myself behind a sheet of glass so to speak and let myself just to watch these girls and no approaching them leavig them in peace. But tonight with the added help of someone I broke down that wall but was it worth it or not....

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:iconnnovgorod4l:
Aw buddy! Buck up! You're a great guy that has poetic talent and wit! You'd be a great catch to any girl but you have to believe in yourself! You know what God helps with selfconfidence too! I don't know if you believe in Him or not but He helps me all the time!

Keep your head up! I :+fav: this poem!

Ci'ara
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in my eyes I truly want to find myself I have no way of knowing how to be confident in myself but I kidna believe that if I can find the way myself and not rely on another then I will feel alot better about it is is jsut somethgn I msut do for myself :) thank you for the encourage ment :) and the fav

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:iconspiritflarewolf:
You are a great guy you shouldn't worry so much. Just believe in yourself. I fav your poem.^_^

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that is somehting I am trygn my hardest to build is my confindence I jsut need to be able to see what others see in myself thank you for hte fave

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To the World you are one person, but to one person you are the world
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My older brothers wouldn't let me play Twister when they played....so I put some Vasiline on the colored circles........Left leg BROKEN!!!!
:iconnnovgorod4l:
Finding yourself before getting another half is always the way to go! I mean I'm single and honestly I'm loving every minute of it I could actually take a relationship or leave it I don't really need it ya know? Anyway I hope you find yourself soon! I may sound like a broken record but God really does help a lot! :D Not problem man I'm always here for ya!
:iconcrusher0508:
yeah I understand that and form recent events I do believe that my mind and out look is unfolding before me so I bele3ieve that I shall be fine in due tiem

I honestly was talkign toa friend I haven';t talk to in a veyr long timeand in talking to her I rea;ized that she is eaxctly what I am looking forjust every thign seems right one problem tho lol she lives n florida and I live in Ohio :XD: but she is coming up here for the summer so maybe somethign could form between us :) a persona can only hope but I am not sittign her waitig for it to happen I'm havign a great tiem regardless :)

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To the World you are one person, but to one person you are the world
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My older brothers wouldn't let me play Twister when they played....so I put some Vasiline on the colored circles........Left leg BROKEN!!!!
:iconspiritflarewolf:
of course^_^

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well to my happiness and delight I have a GF now :)

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To the World you are one person, but to one person you are the world
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My older brothers wouldn't let me play Twister when they played....so I put some Vasiline on the colored circles........Left leg BROKEN!!!!
:iconspiritflarewolf:
Yay!^_^ I'm glad that you're happy:#1:

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