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What do you desire
What is it that fuels your fire

What is it about me
that you seek and crave
yet the the words to admit it
you will take to your grave

Do you want me to wrap my arms around you
for in my arms you find comfort
Do you want me to take you away form here
so we can both shoulder the hurt

Do you want me vanish
for my presence brings tears
Do you want me to fade away
and cast away your fears

on any given day you give me
either little joy or great sorrow
but due to the agony I have felt
I may not be yours tomorrow
©2007-2009 ~Crusher0508
:iconcrusher0508:

Author's Comments

I wrote this today because fo the things going on in my life

I took parts of a poem that I never finished and re-tuned it to the poem it is now

I hope you all like it

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:iconluckylisa:
brilliant! simply brilliant! i love the flow of the poem, it's very nice! the words you used worked well together making a simple yet complex poem. great job! deserves a fave
:iconcrusher0508:
well thank you for your compliments and the fave it was simply just something that I had left unfinished for such a long time and I picked it back up and worked some things out

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To the World you are one person, but to one person you are the world
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My older brothers wouldn't let me play Twister when they played....so I put some Vasiline on the colored circles........Left leg BROKEN!!!!
:iconluckylisa:
i do that sometimes with my stuff too! you did a great job finishing it! :)
:iconcrusher0508:
thank you again :)

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To the World you are one person, but to one person you are the world
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My older brothers wouldn't let me play Twister when they played....so I put some Vasiline on the colored circles........Left leg BROKEN!!!!

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