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The Howl The Night
Did Not Oppose
By Justin Borer

In the forest on this cold, misty, moonlit night.
Nature is calm and quiet with not a soul in sight.
The silence continues, nothing trying to fight.

Then moonlight shines through the trees.
The light continues to flow like a calm breeze.
Casting shadows upon the lonly leaves.

A branch snaps breaking the somber silence.
Something in the darkness moves showing its defiance.
The forest shifts reluctantly to this act of violence.

Through the shadow the moon helps soothe.
This figure has nothing to prove.
Steathy and strong it continued to move.

The figure emerged from the darkness to cast its own shadow.
Through its grey and black fur the wind does blow.
With its pointed ears every creature it does know.

The creature sat on the ground and looked at the starry sky.
He felt alone, that, no one could deny.
through its bluish-gray eyes it wondered why.

He looked up at the bright full moon.
He let out a howl and held its desperate tune.
Hoping someone would respond very soon.

No one replied to his desperate call.
His heart still felt so small.
He wondered why he even tried at all.

His ears dropped and he turned to walk away.
He wanted to go but he also wanted to stay.
Then another tune broke the silence coming his way.

A howl came from off in the distance.
It rang through the night with little resistence.
The call was one of love and persistance.

He then realized something he didn’t from the start
There was someone out there looking for his heart.
Once they would meet they would never part.

Then the creature replied and he arose.
Following the feeling he truly knows.
Toward the one the night did not oppose.
©2004-2009 ~Crusher0508
:iconcrusher0508:

Author's Comments

ok just so you know the real title of this poem is " The Howl teh night did not oppose but DA's stupid line rule wouldn't let me fit the entire title it. well I have had an obssesion with wolves since I was a little kid and I have realized that obssession has come form a sort of connection with wolves. I can't explain it but OI feel connected to the ways wolves are. I can't realy explain it that well but the connection is there. Well I kinda made it so wolves were longing for someone to be with Just liek us humans and there is a part of the poem that actually points out who I am talking about in this poem but only a SELECT few knows about this fact (try like 1) but even if you don't figure out who it is the poem should still be just as good just there is a hidden meaning behind the poem ^^ hahahaha Suspense it fun

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:iconnnovgorod4l:
This is very very nice, great rhymes too nice job! :w00t:
:iconweatherstorm:
Hmm this poem sounds very familiar to me... and will most likely bare a striking resemblance to another person as well. You know who you are ;)

Anyways, great poem you are getting a wonderful way with words that makes it flow so smoothly. Quite the poet you are!
:iconerika18:
This is amazing. ^__________^ Actually, you're my favorite poet. :clap: :highfive: :w00t: :boogie:

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"When debating with ones self, you often find that you lose." ---Me
:iconyellowwolf:
O wow. Awesome poem. I really lurve it! That is some kickass rhyming and writing skilz! ^_^

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"Laugh and the world laughs with you, weep and you weep alone"- Oh Dae-su from Oldboy

"Fashion is a form of ugliness so intolerable that we have to alter it every six months"- Oscar Wilde
:iconspiritflarewolf:
Wonderful poem I loved it!:clap: It was truly excellent I enjoyed reading it. I wish I could write like that I have a hard time writing poems that long^_^' and I have an obsession with wolves too!^_^

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:iconcrusher0508:
lol thank you I love wolves also I haven;'t writen poetry in awile (not to meantion beign on here in quite soem time XD XD XD) but I feel as tho I should get back into it

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To the World you are one person, but to one person you are the world
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My older brothers wouldn't let me play Twister when they played....so I put some Vasiline on the colored circles........Left leg BROKEN!!!!
:iconspiritflarewolf:
I think you should definately get back into writing poetry. This poem was too excellent to have be all alone without any poem friends^_^

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I wish it did too the romantic inside of me mutst be awoken again which means only oen think I must fine someone who brings the powerful emotions out in me

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To the World you are one person, but to one person you are the world
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My older brothers wouldn't let me play Twister when they played....so I put some Vasiline on the colored circles........Left leg BROKEN!!!!
:iconspiritflarewolf:
That's the spirit! :w00t: I'm sure you'll find someone who awakens your powerful emotions soon :nod: :D

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Click Me to blow up Mars
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:iconcrusher0508:
that is my hope :) I truly need to get back in the romantic nautre again if only I had ideas that coudl spark my train of thought XD

I've recently written lines and groups of lines but my mind can't seem to fuse them or expand on them

here are some of them

The end is coming, a time so dear
I ask that you please don’t shed a tear
I will live on within you so do not fear
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Should I stay or should I go
casting myself intho shadows once more
no one shall ever know
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To hold you in my arms would be such a wonderful dream
but in reality it’s not what it would seem
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then I am a longer oen but I will send you that noather tiem if you want

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To the World you are one person, but to one person you are the world
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My older brothers wouldn't let me play Twister when they played....so I put some Vasiline on the colored circles........Left leg BROKEN!!!!

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