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The Howl The Night
Did Not Oppose
By Justin Borer

In the forest on this cold, misty, moonlit night.
Nature is calm and quiet with not a soul in sight.
The silence continues, nothing trying to fight.

Then moonlight shines through the trees.
The light continues to flow like a calm breeze.
Casting shadows upon the lonly leaves.

A branch snaps breaking the somber silence.
Something in the darkness moves showing its defiance.
The forest shifts reluctantly to this act of violence.

Through the shadow the moon helps soothe.
This figure has nothing to prove.
Steathy and strong it continued to move.

The figure emerged from the darkness to cast its own shadow.
Through its grey and black fur the wind does blow.
With its pointed ears every creature it does know.

The creature sat on the ground and looked at the starry sky.
He felt alone, that, no one could deny.
through its bluish-gray eyes it wondered why.

He looked up at the bright full moon.
He let out a howl and held its desperate tune.
Hoping someone would respond very soon.

No one replied to his desperate call.
His heart still felt so small.
He wondered why he even tried at all.

His ears dropped and he turned to walk away.
He wanted to go but he also wanted to stay.
Then another tune broke the silence coming his way.

A howl came from off in the distance.
It rang through the night with little resistence.
The call was one of love and persistance.

He then realized something he didnít from the start
There was someone out there looking for his heart.
Once they would meet they would never part.

Then the creature replied and he arose.
Following the feeling he truly knows.
Toward the one the night did not oppose.
ok just so you know the real title of this poem is " The Howl teh night did not oppose but DA's stupid line rule wouldn't let me fit the entire title it. well I have had an obssesion with wolves since I was a little kid and I have realized that obssession has come form a sort of connection with wolves. I can't explain it but OI feel connected to the ways wolves are. I can't realy explain it that well but the connection is there. Well I kinda made it so wolves were longing for someone to be with Just liek us humans and there is a part of the poem that actually points out who I am talking about in this poem but only a SELECT few knows about this fact (try like 1) but even if you don't figure out who it is the poem should still be just as good just there is a hidden meaning behind the poem ^^ hahahaha Suspense it fun
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buddydreamer92 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
truly a great poem. i adore wolves. they are such wonderful, strong, intelligent animals. my spirit animal is a wolf. so i relate with them as well. great poem! i hope you write more like it!
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Sassysas99 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
This is such a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing it
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Lobocc45 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Great poem!! And think some do understand where your coming from, again amaing poem
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NulKule Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
funny, I understood it very clearly its kinda' strange but I feel like know all about it ummmm like you said its hard to explain but I get it, understand it and can relate to it. the obsession you have described is very much like mine I have many thins I wish to say about what I know but its hard to. lets just say that I am deeply in love......
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ponymaster256 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
REALLY ME TOO I ALSO LOVE WOLVES
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shellygo Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013
OMG!!! I love this!
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XxMrBluexX Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
Dude this is awesome i am just amazed
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wolves09492 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WOW GOOD POME LOVE IT
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fireblaze211 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
when i read who rote this, i thought that it said " Justin Bieber"
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Arisa-Ghostwing Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It was beautiful ^^
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SongOfTheWolf98 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wolves rock! So does your poem!
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ZintekiaRed Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011
I hear you. We are all wolves. Love it!
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ravenfurry Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011
LOVE IT!
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Kaitlyn23 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Beautiful poem!!! Loved the rhyme sceeme, and I could picture it all... Really tugs on the heart strings...
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Demyxismynickname Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
wow, that was really nice, i like how you managed to make it rhyme
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WolfPredatorWarrior Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011
This is a nice poem:D :)
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LillyShertigal Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Wow this is a really good poem. you obviously have a nack for choosing your words. It a new fav. for me!!
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Th3Chos3nOn3 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
This poem...left me speechless.
Wolves are my favorite animal, as well. :)
They are truly beautiful, and magnificent.
This is the most heartfelt poem I've read about wolves.
So beautiful:heart:
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gummie99 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
beautiful! this is an instant fav! ive loved wolves ever since i can remember! nice work.
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darkdragonangel0013 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2010
OMG!!! I love this poem!the wolf is like my favorite animal and i'm kind of obsessed with them, so i'm always drawing them. this is the greatest one i've ever read!
the wolf is really hard to write aomething so wonderful about i think without it sounding too dull. You're seriously good
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samurifox622 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2009
That was the best poem i've EVER read!! it reminded me of my true love.
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WolvesReign13 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
...........................I'm at a loss for words.....you...........are....the most.....BEAUTIFUL poet I know......I wish you nothing but a successful life...and a wonderous journey
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Crusher0508 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2009   Writer
thank you :) that means alot :) I never thought this poem would be that great lol but it turned out to be my most popular poem by far

thank you again for the compliment
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WolvesReign13 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
You are most welcome :) I think its awesome
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ginginchi Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2008
dude,u remind me of one of my friend's cousins.he loves wolves and blueberries and has some sort of connection to wolves,AND his name is Justin Arthur.
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narutoshypergf Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2008   Photographer
nice poem
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narutoshypergf Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2008   Photographer
the poem was very touching it vwas to rymy though
I LOVE NARUTO
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Ferry-chan Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2008  Student Writer
awesome poem....and yet it strikes true in a lonely souls heart...(sighs)
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Crusher0508 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2008   Writer
all I can say is to not give up hope I felt the very same way when I wrote that poem and believe me that it will all get better
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Ferry-chan Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2008  Student Writer
you really think? to see how i feel thru life daily, check out my poem Suicide Ride
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deidarasbabe Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2008
tht is some AWESOME skills u have! lol the poem was beautiful i could of swore i teared up a bit! it rhymed, its about wolves, and its a poem! fave and watch@!!
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Crusher0508 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2008   Writer
thank you very much for both they are greatly appreciated :)
I'm glad you liked it
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deidarasbabe Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2008
:D lol np!
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Zera24 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2007
WOW! :omfg: I luv wolves to! :heart: great poem, you should come check out my poems :D
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Crusher0508 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2007   Writer
thank you and I might just do that
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Zera24 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2007
welcome :D
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hummingbird88 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2007
If you were to look in my fav gallery, you would see that i faved this sometime ago. At the time i did not know it was you, all i did was do the search on wolves, that's when i found this awesome poem. I do so love it, there is alot of DA's that "LOVE" anything to do with wolves & the moon as i do my whole life. Your art so rocks :headbang:, "KUDO's" to you, you have :heart:!!!.
Yours Truly,
.:heart::rose::butterflytwo:.
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Crusher0508 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2007   Writer
thank you :) wolves have a very deep place for me in my heart and to be able to get praise for wolf lovers on the beauty of the poem s a great honor for me :) so thank you
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nataya230 Featured By Owner May 8, 2007
i loved it!
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Eru-Maamandil Featured By Owner May 2, 2007
Congratulations! This is a real beauty!
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wolfgang221 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2006   Writer
I know what you mean by your obsession with wolves. I've admired them for their survival and their longing for a companion.
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Crusher0508 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2007   Writer
not even that but even just their overall state of the pack when they watch overeach other. I don't knwo about you but I get a little peeved inside when they use wolves either in movies or coommercials as evil harmful animals when most of the times they only attack becuase they or someone in their pack feels threated by them. It saddens me that most can't see their beauty but thankful that there are people like you that can cherish them like me
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Amberous Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Ok. I know how hard it is to make poems rhyme so kudos to you. You made it rhyme while having sense still in it. I hate people who rhyme for the hell of it but you have done an awesome job. I am truly impressed because to write something like that needs a lot of thought. How long did that take you?
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Crusher0508 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2006   Writer
thank you bvyer much and it took me maybw a day or 2 weaving in and out between school work in the day and work at night so I feel I did it quite rapidly
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SpiritFlareWolf Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2005  Hobbyist Photographer
Wonderful poem I loved it!:clap: It was truly excellent I enjoyed reading it. I wish I could write like that I have a hard time writing poems that long^_^' and I have an obsession with wolves too!^_^
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Crusher0508 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2006   Writer
lol thank you I love wolves also I haven;'t writen poetry in awile (not to meantion beign on here in quite soem time XD XD XD) but I feel as tho I should get back into it
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SpiritFlareWolf Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2006  Hobbyist Photographer
I think you should definately get back into writing poetry. This poem was too excellent to have be all alone without any poem friends^_^
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Crusher0508 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2006   Writer
I wish it did too the romantic inside of me mutst be awoken again which means only oen think I must fine someone who brings the powerful emotions out in me
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SpiritFlareWolf Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2006  Hobbyist Photographer
That's the spirit! :w00t: I'm sure you'll find someone who awakens your powerful emotions soon :nod: :D
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Crusher0508 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2006   Writer
that is my hope :) I truly need to get back in the romantic nautre again if only I had ideas that coudl spark my train of thought XD

I've recently written lines and groups of lines but my mind can't seem to fuse them or expand on them

here are some of them

The end is coming, a time so dear
I ask that you please don’t shed a tear
I will live on within you so do not fear
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Should I stay or should I go
casting myself intho shadows once more
no one shall ever know
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To hold you in my arms would be such a wonderful dream
but in reality it’s not what it would seem
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then I am a longer oen but I will send you that noather tiem if you want
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